The media has become too influential in people’s lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Everybody knows that all
media
is very common nowadays. Has it become too infuluentıal in people
's lives? İt depends for everywhere and every public because somewhere and people
use it benefit way or bad. İt is changing akording
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according
people
. We can descos negatif side and pozitif side.
On the one hand, Change preposition
to people
media
is too much effective on
some Change preposition
in
people
's life, They can change according to
the media
. sosyal meda is very commen in media
. That's why, some people
can like following who people
are feuomuse. For example
, have a film named Kurtlar Vadisi. İt is about fight
a mafia and men Change the verb form
is about fought
is about fighting
people
change character
and they felling Add an article
the character
that is
real
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a real
mafia's
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mafia
person
.
On the other hand
, have many benefits program
Fix the agreement mistake
programs
on
the Change preposition
in
media
. person
can Add an article
a person
the person
following
news, documentary, scient and Wrong verb form
follow
politic
Replace the word
political
people
it is very benefits
because Replace the word
beneficial
this
is very benefit
Replace the word
beneficial
on
Change preposition
for
people
life, Change noun form
people's
for instance
, many people
following
political Wrong verb form
follow
person
and Fix the agreement mistake
people
following
them. Because they wanna who Wrong verb form
follow
person
good politician for there and can get some information about them. They can know who is better for them. That's why social media
and general media
are very important for people
.
To sum up
, as printed above, media
is a chance for every country and for every people
you can use it a
good way or bad way which you ,want you can choose. İt is your Change preposition
in a
dicisıon
. İn my opinion, every government have to control Correct your spelling
decision
medıal
, special for kids because they don't know which program or ablucatation they benefit that's why government and family should control on Correct your spelling
media
media
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