The media has become too influential in people’s lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Everybody knows that all
media
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is very common nowadays. Has it become too infuluentıal in
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's lives? İt depends for everywhere and every public because somewhere and
people
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use it benefit way or bad. İt is changing
akording
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according
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people
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to people
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. We can descos negatif side and pozitif side. On the one hand,
media
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is too much effective
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in
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some
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's life, They can change
according to
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the
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. sosyal meda is very commen in
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. That's why, some
people
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can like following who
people
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are feuomuse.
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, have a film named Kurtlar Vadisi. İt
is about fight
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is about fought
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a mafia and men
people
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change
character
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and they felling
that is
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real
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a real
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mafia's
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mafia
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person
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.
On the other hand
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, have many benefits
program
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programs
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on
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the
media
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.
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person
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a person
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can
following
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follow
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news, documentary, scient and
politic
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political
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people
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it is very
benefits
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beneficial
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because
this
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is very
benefit
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beneficial
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on
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for
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people
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people's
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life,
for instance
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, many
people
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following
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follow
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political
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person
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people
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and
following
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follow
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them. Because they wanna who
person
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good politician for there and can get some information about them. They can know who is better for them. That's why social
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and general
media
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are very important for
people
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.
To sum up
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, as printed above,
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is a chance for every country and for every
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you can use it
a
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good way or bad way which you ,want you can choose. İt is your
dicisıon
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decision
. İn my opinion, every government have to control
medıal
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media
, special for kids because they don't know which program or ablucatation they benefit that's why government and family should control on
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influential
  • negative development
  • opinions
  • perceptions
  • unrealistic standards
  • ideals
  • manipulate
  • distort
  • information
  • addiction
  • dependency
  • privacy
  • valuable
  • entertainment
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