The media has become too influential in people’s lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everybody knows that all
media
is very common nowadays. Has it become too infuluentıal in
people
's lives? İt depends for everywhere and every public because somewhere and
people
use it benefit way or bad. İt is changing
akording
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according
people
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to people
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. We can descos negatif side and pozitif side. On the one hand,
media
is too much effective
on
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in
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some
people
's life, They can change
according to
the
media
. sosyal meda is very commen in
media
. That's why, some
people
can like following who
people
are feuomuse.
For example
, have a film named Kurtlar Vadisi. İt
is about fight
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is about fought
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a mafia and men
people
change
character
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and they felling
that is
real
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a real
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mafia's
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mafia
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person
.
On the other hand
, have many benefits
program
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programs
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on
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the
media
.
person
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a person
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can
following
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follow
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news, documentary, scient and
politic
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political
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people
it is very
benefits
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beneficial
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because
this
is very
benefit
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beneficial
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on
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for
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people
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people's
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life,
for instance
, many
people
following
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follow
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political
person
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people
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and
following
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follow
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them. Because they wanna who
person
good politician for there and can get some information about them. They can know who is better for them. That's why social
media
and general
media
are very important for
people
.
To sum up
, as printed above,
media
is a chance for every country and for every
people
you can use it
a
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good way or bad way which you ,want you can choose. İt is your
dicisıon
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decision
. İn my opinion, every government have to control
medıal
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media
, special for kids because they don't know which program or ablucatation they benefit that's why government and family should control on
media
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influential
  • negative development
  • opinions
  • perceptions
  • unrealistic standards
  • ideals
  • manipulate
  • distort
  • information
  • addiction
  • dependency
  • privacy
  • valuable
  • entertainment
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