With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
believe youngsters should have taken only academic
subjects
at school. I completely disagree with
this
idea and would like to explain it from my perspective.
To begin
with, the education system in many countries is prepared to answer all necessities,
such
as mathematics, and gardening. During the non-academic lesson time, young
people
have a chance to be interested in different areas which they like doing.
This
feeling helps to work in non-pressure situations.
As a result
of
this
situation, young
people
could focus on easily next academic session.
On the other hand
, most young
people
don't have any idea what to do in their future life as a business.
This
opportunity gives them to understand which activity fits their persona and character.
According to
some scientific reports, being keen on non-academic
subjects
is one of the best ways of
relaxation
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at school. because of
this
situation, teenagers are encouraged to learn something
besides
academic
subjects
by their teachers and families.
Thus
, youngster and their families could learn about children's abilities and strong ways in their personal life. All things to be considered, the education system should include both academic and non-academic
subjects
to prepare children for real life.
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