Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to provide constructive feedback about your which I purchased last
week.
I am fond of learning different culinary skills. Therefore
, I frequently buy cooking-related books and magazines. Last
week, my friend suggested your Master Cooking magazine
, which I found informative and interesting.
I appreciate that the quality of the paper was finer than other cooking magazines. Apart from
this
, each recipe was given in-depth details. It was easy to follow all the cooking steps. However
, some silly mistakes disappointed me. For example
., grammatical errors, and spelling mistakes. Moreover
, the Magazine
was short having only 15 pages.
Your Magazine
has been popular among readers. The mistakes could be improved by updating proofreading methods.IA technology should be used to make writing more accurate.IT would be a reliable and cost-effective method.
I hope you will take serious action to improve the quality of magazine
writing.
Kind Regards,
ParmSubmitted by parminderbitti3 on
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coherence cohesion
Work on reducing minor grammatical errors and awkward phrases to improve clarity.
task achievement
Expand on your suggestions for improvement to provide a more comprehensive response.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with distinct sections for each point: why you bought the magazine, what you liked and disliked, and suggestions for improvement.
task achievement
The tone is appropriate for a letter to the editor, remaining respectful and constructive.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite