Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work?
It is often argued by
people
that it is advantageous for Use synonyms
kids
to Use synonyms
work
and gain some money Use synonyms
although
there are other Linking Words
people
who consider Use synonyms
this
harmful for them. In Linking Words
this
essay, I will outline the pros and cons of paid Linking Words
work
for Use synonyms
children
.
On the one hand, without a doubt, Use synonyms
children
gain lots of Use synonyms
experiences
by working Use synonyms
as well as
boosting their social skills and capabilities since they contribute to a wide variety of Linking Words
people
at Use synonyms
work
. To put it another way, Use synonyms
children
must be able to cooperate with their colleagues and Use synonyms
also
they should get along well with customers too, Linking Words
therefore
, they will learn to communicate with different Linking Words
people
correctly to reach their goals. Not only does Use synonyms
work
increase Use synonyms
children
's abilities but Use synonyms
also
it provides them with some money that helps Linking Words
kids
to become independent of their parents. If I want to help my Use synonyms
kids
to get applicable Use synonyms
experiences
, I will suggest paid Use synonyms
work
to them. Use synonyms
For instance
, when I was a child I used to study a lot Linking Words
while
I had a friend who had a part-time job. After years that we grew up, I found that he has better social skills and is more successful than me in contributing to Linking Words
people
since had gained lots of Use synonyms
experiences
during his Use synonyms
childhood
.
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On the other hand
, there are a group of Linking Words
people
who think that paid Use synonyms
work
is harmful to Use synonyms
children
as they are child and do have not enough bodily ability to Use synonyms
work
and it is bothering them. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some Linking Words
children
can not handle both studying and working at the same time and undoubtedly they will fail. Use synonyms
In other words
, during Linking Words
childhood
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children
are physically weak Use synonyms
while
they have a strong mind that can learn everything quickly. Linking Words
Consequently
, it is better for them to allocate their time to study a lot Linking Words
instead
of working. On top of that, during Linking Words
childhood
, Use synonyms
kids
are not able to defend themselves and since there are lots of vicious individuals in society, they will be abused. Not only will not Use synonyms
children
gain helpful Use synonyms
experiences
, but Use synonyms
also
they may be abused. Linking Words
For instance
, some recent surveys and research showed that a high percentage of working Linking Words
children
reported some types of abuse and insult by their bosses. Use synonyms
As a result
, Linking Words
childhood
is not an appropriate time for Use synonyms
children
to get a paid occupation.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
although
paid Linking Words
work
can have some benefits for Use synonyms
children
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such
as gaining money and experience Linking Words
as well as
improving social skills, it has some irrefutable and severe disadvantages for Linking Words
children
too including being abused and failing exams. It is better for Use synonyms
children
to dedicate themselves to studying Use synonyms
instead
of working since they have strong minds and are able to learn everything Linking Words
while
they have weak bodies and can not Linking Words
work
hard and it is bothering for them too.Use synonyms
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