The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
The given table compares the views of male and female members about the
club
’s
activities
, facilities and opening
hours
.
Overall
, a sizable percentage of females are very satisfied with the
club
's
hours
,
whereas
a small percentage of males are dissatisfied with its
activities
. It can be seen from the table that 63% and 64% of
men
and
women
, respectively, are extremely happy with
club
amenities, compared to 22% and 27% of
women
and
men
who are satisfied and just 14% and 10% who are dissatisfied.
In addition
, the chart shows that more
men
than
women
find
club
activities
to be extremely satisfying,
whereas
only 35% of
women
are happy with
this
facility.
It is clear that
the majority of individuals, on average, seem to be really satisfied with all services,
however
, 37% and 30% of people of two genders, respectively, say that the
club
's operating
hours
and
activities
are dissatisfactory. Despite the fact that just 37% of
men
and a very small number of
women
members are dissatisfied with the operating
hours
, 72% of
women
and 44% of
men
are extremely happy with
this
service.
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