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The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
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The given table compares the views of male and female members about the
club
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’s
activities
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, facilities and opening
hours
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.
Overall
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, a sizable percentage of females are very satisfied with the
club
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's
hours
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,
whereas
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 a small percentage of males are dissatisfied with its
activities
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. It can be seen from the table that 63% and 64% of
men
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 and
women
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, respectively, are extremely happy with
club
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 amenities, compared to 22% and 27% of
women
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 and
men
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 who are satisfied and just 14% and 10% who are dissatisfied.
In addition
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, the chart shows that more
men
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 than
women
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 find
club
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activities
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 to be extremely satisfying,
whereas
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 only 35% of
women
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 are happy with
this
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 facility.
It is clear that
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 the majority of individuals, on average, seem to be really satisfied with all services,
however
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, 37% and 30% of people of two genders, respectively, say that the
club
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's operating
hours
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 and
activities
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 are dissatisfactory. Despite the fact that just 37% of
men
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 and a very small number of
women
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 members are dissatisfied with the operating
hours
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, 72% of
women
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 and 44% of
men
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 are extremely happy with
this
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 service.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, hours, club, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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