The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
The given table compares the views of male and female members about the
club
’s activities
, facilities and opening hours
.
Overall
, a sizable percentage of females are very satisfied with the club
's hours
, whereas
a small percentage of males are dissatisfied with its activities
.
It can be seen from the table that 63% and 64% of men
and women
, respectively, are extremely happy with club
amenities, compared to 22% and 27% of women
and men
who are satisfied and just 14% and 10% who are dissatisfied. In addition
, the chart shows that more men
than women
find club
activities
to be extremely satisfying, whereas
only 35% of women
are happy with this
facility.
It is clear that
the majority of individuals, on average, seem to be really satisfied with all services,however
, 37% and 30% of people of two genders, respectively, say that the club
's operating hours
and activities
are dissatisfactory. Despite the fact that just 37% of men
and a very small number of women
members are dissatisfied with the operating hours
, 72% of women
and 44% of men
are extremely happy with this
service.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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