The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates medium carbon dioxide (co2)emission per human in the United
Kingdom
,Sweden
,Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 .
Overall
,The number of cases in the Uk was more than in Sweden
and Italy , and also
in Sweden
until it reached ,Italy was just below Portugal,the number of cases in Portugal had the lowest numbers of the period .
According to
the average carbon dioxide (,co2) emissions it is noticeable that there is a development in the United Kingdom
in 1967 was rate peaked at approximately 11 per cent
and roughly 9 per cent
in Sweden
and just below 4.2 per cent
in Italy while
in Portugal recorded around 1 proportion,United Kingdom
was rate remind stable at 1977 but Regarding the given data, it is remarkable that there is a leap in Sweden
around 10.2 percentage
also
Italy had to rise to roughly 6.2 degrees while
in Portugal approximately 2 per cent
.
In United Kingdom
and Sweden
were experienced a downward trend in 1987 the percentage
Uk 10 and Sweden
per cent
8 ,whilst in Italy just below was around 6.2 per cent
and Portugal was 4 per cent
,Uk continued to decline steadily to the end of the
period 1997,2007 per Correct article usage
the the
cent
around 9 ,like that Sweden
was 6 per cent
in 1997 and around 5 the percentage
while
Italy and Portugal had each increased in 1997 ,2007 for Italy was roughly 7 the percentage
whilst Portugal was just over 5 the percentage
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