When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. ls this a good thing or a bad thing?
It seems natural for
people
to judge others
according to
their outlooks or behaviors
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behaviours
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first
glance and decide whether to make friends
with them. I partially agree that this
judgement can benefit us and also
think it can sometimes cause problems.
Making a quick judgemenr
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judgment
people
can be beneficial by allowing efficiency. That is
because in
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people
, as they choose them according to
their personal preferences and show their interests and tastes in purpose when they purchase those clothes. Therefore
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of becoming
friends
without wasting time
on socialising with them and assuring again that we dislike them. In this
way, we can have more time
and energy for other essential things, such
as accompaniment to loved family members, taking parenting responsibility or fulfilling daily tasks. Thinking Fast and Slow, a famous psychological book, made a great explanation about this
behaviour by saying that there are two systems in our brains. One is for fast processing of information such
as judging people
by their outlooks, and the other is to slowly think about things with a comprehensive consideration. And both of these two systems work together in our daily lives which is decided by genes.
On the other hand
, it may cause discrimination if we only depend on our first
glance to decide our relationships with others
. That is
because human
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instead
, we all have the
experiences with our Correct article usage
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friends
when we find us
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others
for a long time
, which means patience is the key factor to establish long-term connections with others
. If the first
impression is accurate, problems such
as being betrayed by friends
or cheated by partners could never happen. Therefore
, even though the first
glance can sometimes help us to save time
, it is still worth to use
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along with
people
that we dislike because of their outlooks, and it may provide some opportunities for us to step out of our comfort zones and know a new group of people
we can never imagine before. For instance
, Bill Gaze gave a great example of this
by his own experience. He and his best friend, Tom, had the chance to know each other in
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Tom a genius in computer with a great sense of humour.
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they meet them because it can be efficient in this
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while
using a relatively longer period to get to know people
before any judgement can also
be worthy, and it is up to the individual to decide which approach can be the suitable one for them.Submitted by mxinyao on
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Your essay demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and presents both sides of the argument effectively. However, ensure that you clearly present your position in the introduction and address both perspectives in the body of the essay.
coherence and cohesion
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