When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. ls this a good thing or a bad thing?
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Your essay demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and presents both sides of the argument effectively. However, ensure that you clearly present your position in the introduction and address both perspectives in the body of the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay is generally well-structured and uses a variety of cohesive devices. Make sure to use more transitional phrases, such as 'in addition', 'moreover', and 'furthermore', to improve the overall coherence of the essay.
Your opinion
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