The graph below shows information about the ;anduades that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the indormation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.

The graph below shows information about the ;anduades that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study.

Summarise the indormation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.
The graph shows how many
students
13-year-old
students
studied French and
Mandarin
between 2000 and the present day in a school in England.
Overall
, it can be seen that more
students
have been choosing to study
Mandarin
, but French is still the most popular language option. Since 2005, the trends have not changed as much. In 2000, the number of
students
who took French was 150, compared to just under 10
students
who chose
Mandarin
so there was a significant difference in numbers at
this
time. By 2005, the figure had fallen
considerable
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considerably
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for French, but had risen dramatically for
mandarin
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Mandarin
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and had reached a peak at 75
students
. Since 2005, the trends have not changed as much. French gained some popularity in 2006
,
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apply
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but has remained fairly stable since
then
at about 90
students
.
In contrast
, the number of
students
Mandarin
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in Mandarin
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dipped in 2006 and
then
fluctuated
,
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before it returned to 75.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, mandarin with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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