Society is based om rules and laws.If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do,it could not function To what extend do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
In modern societies,
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the
law
is the structure of is organisation and is Use synonyms
tipically
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typically
though
that individual freedom will lead to Correct your spelling
thought
chaotic
community. As far as Correct article usage
a chaotic
I’m concern
an equilibrium between Change the verb form
I’m concerned
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this
two points of view it’s important for the correct function of a state or country. Correct determiner usage
these
Usually
when Add a comma
,Usually
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law
is more important than Add an article
the law
a law
the
individual Correct article usage
apply
rights
the result is a dictatorship. Use synonyms
In
the other hand, when individual Change preposition
On
rights
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overuled
the Correct your spelling
override
law
, Use synonyms
an
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apply
anarqy
could be created.
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anarchy
energy
Firstly
let’s analyse what Linking Words
happen
to a society when Change the verb form
happens
law
is more important than freedom. For instants in Nicaragua we could see how today through special powers given by the Use synonyms
law
to the president, human Use synonyms
rights
(like Use synonyms
legal
judicial process) of criminals are been Correct article usage
the legal
denyed
. Even though criminals represent a great danger to a community they have the right to use their Correct your spelling
denied
constitucionals
Correct your spelling
constitutional
constitutionals
rights
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the Linking Words
law
shouldn’t be over the right of the Use synonyms
individuals
, because Use synonyms
this
could take the country into a dictatorship.
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Secondly
, let’s talk about when the Linking Words
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individuals
Change noun form
individual's
rights
overtake the Use synonyms
law
of the state. Use synonyms
For
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example
what’s happening today in the United Add a comma
,example
states
about the gender disputes. A trans person, even though Capitalize word
States
it
has the right to express himself Correct pronoun usage
he
she
it
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in
what ever
manner he likes, he/she shouldn’t go over other Correct your spelling
whatever
peoples
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people's
rights
. Use synonyms
Thus
, there should be respect for the Linking Words
law
by members of the society.
In Use synonyms
conclusion
I consider that there should be an equilibrium between the power of the Add a comma
,conclusion
law
over the Use synonyms
individuals
, and Use synonyms
a
respect of the Remove the article
apply
law
by the Use synonyms
individuals
. Use synonyms
This
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to
prevent both, a dictatorship ( excess Add a missing verb
is to
law
), Use synonyms
an
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and
a
Change the article
an
anarqy
( excess of freedom).Correct your spelling
anarchy
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite