the charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008

the charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008
The pie charts compare five categories of
household
expenditure in the
UK
and New
Zealand
in the years 1980 and 2008. It is noticeable that the percentage of spending on food and drinks had dropped in
both
countries,
while
the utility bills had increased over the 28-year period.
In addition
, families in the
UK
spent a larger amount of their
household
budget on entertainment, compared to families in New
Zealand
. In the year 1980, 29% of the average New
Zealand
household
budget went to food and drink,
while
the equivalent figure for a
UK
home was 23%. By 2008, expenditure on food and drink had fallen by 4% in New
Zealand
, and by a full 10% in the
UK
.
On the contrary
,
both
countries saw an increase in expenditure on utility bills for the average
household
, from 27% to 31% in New
Zealand
and from 26% to 28% in the
UK
. Leisure activities accounted for the highest proportion of
UK
household
spending in
both
years, 27% in 1980 and 34% in 2008, but only the third highest proportion in New
Zealand
, 18% in 1980 and 17% in 2008. In
both
countries, transports costs and other costs took approximately 15% and 10% respectively.
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