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You Are Due To Start An English Course Next Week But You Will Not Be Able To Because You Have Some Problems

#english #course #week
Dear
Ms.
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 Sally Flannigan, I am writing to inform you about I am unable to attend the English As
Primary
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a Primary
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 Language course
that is
 starting
from
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next week
due to
 my mother has been diagnosed with appendicitis. Since two months ago my mother started having acute pain in her stomach area intermittently
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 she refused to go to the doctor.
Last
 week the pain was acute that she almost passed out. The doctor confirmed it is
due to
 appendicitis and had to undergo removal surgery at
earliest
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. Me and my mother are living together and I have to take care of her after the surgery until she is able to carry out her daily activities.
According to
 the
doctor
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 the recovery period will be at least two months. Upon discussion with my
faulty
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unfortunately
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 I will have to defer the semester and will
re-enroll
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 in your course
during
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next summer. Any inconvenience is regretted. Kind Regards, Samantha
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