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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The diagrams illustrate the development plan for the airport for the following year.
Overall
, the remarkable improvements are they will extend the hallway to increase the gate number and change the walkway to the sky train. In departure and ,arrival sections will provide more amenities. As is given illustrations, now they have 8
gates
 and walkways, which are on the left of the hallway. The development plans to settle the sky train in the middle of the hallway , assessing to the boarding
gates
, and extend the building to increase the number of
gates
 to 18.
Moreover
, in departures, the check-in counters will move from the left to the right and the cafe will change to be at the left of the entrance. They will
also
 add the bag drop section on the left before security and passport control. Before the passengers reach the
gates
, there will be shops for them . In the arrivals, now they do not have any amenities for passengers,
on the contrary
, in the next year, they plan to put the cafe, ATM, and car hire on the right after the customs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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