You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, and you are having a wonderful time.you promised to write to himand let him know what you think of his suggestion . Write a letter to your travel agent as promised , and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of your holiday. Explain why you think he made the right choice for you.

Dear Larry Steve, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am enjoying my holidays in Maldives. I am thrilled to have been here and enjoying my time in the beach house resort booked by you as part of my itinerary. I am planning to take a scuba diving session with scuba experts before the end of the holidays. the expert has told me about safety measures to take and inform me about how great will be the experience. ,

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the experience of being in the water for the first time will be exciting.

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must thank you for choosing and guiding me to take my vacation on

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wonderful island. it is beautiful and full of scenery. especially beaches are so beautiful. I was sceptical to choose options like

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before taking holidays. But I must admire your advice and guidance which lead me to

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vacation. looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, David Boon.

yash334

Aug 4, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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160 words

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