You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

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Dear Jun, How are you? I hope you're doing well. I am excited to tell you that there will be a cooking

class

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course at my college, and I want to invite you to join the

class

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with me. The cooking

class

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will

held

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next semester at the meeting hall behind the campus.

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, the

class

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will be only once a week, so

this

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would be

great

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opportunity for us to enhance our cooking

skill

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. Let me tell you about the information.

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, the tutor who will teach us is particularly hired by the college from Italy.

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, as I am aware, you are a fan of

Italian-cuisine

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Italian cuisine

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right?

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I believe

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perfectly aligns with your interest.

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, there is a local restaurant in the city

center

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, how about we meet there and discuss

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the details.

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, I will be available in the morning at 9AM. I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards. Lim

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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