You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Dear Jun, How are you? I hope you're doing well. I am excited to tell you that there will be a cooking
class
course at my college, and I want to invite you to join the
class
with me. The cooking
class
will
held
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next semester at the meeting hall behind the campus.
Moreover
, the
class
will be only once a week, so
this
would be
great
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a great
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opportunity for us to enhance our cooking
skill
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skills
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. Let me tell you about the information.
Firstly
, the tutor who will teach us is particularly hired by the college from Italy.
Additionally
, as I am aware, you are a fan of
Italian-cuisine
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Italian cuisine
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right?
so
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So
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I believe
this
is
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perfectly aligns with your interest.
Furthermore
, there is a local restaurant in the city
center
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centre
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, how about we meet there and discuss
more
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apply
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the details.
In addition
, I will be available in the morning at 9AM. I am looking forward to your reply. Warm regards. Lim
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