The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.
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The presented diagram displays the average numbers of students per
class
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in primary
schools
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and lower secondary
schools
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in 6 different
countries
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and the world average in 2006.
Overall
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, the average numbers of students per
class
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in primary
schools
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and lower secondary
schools
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in South
Korea
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were the highest among the six
countries
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respectively.
In addition
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, the average number of students per
class
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in primary
schools
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in 3
countries
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(South
Korea
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, Japan, and Mexico) and the world average was lower than that of those in lower secondary
schools
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. An opposite pattern was observed in the UK, Denmark, and Iceland. In 2006, the average number of pupils per
class
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in primary
schools
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in South
Korea
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was the most among six
countries
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, with around 34.
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, that of those in lower secondary
schools
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in South
Korea
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was higher than that of those in primary
schools
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in South
Korea
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, with close to 36, which was the same as in Japan and Mexico. That of those in primary
schools
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in Mexico was less among six
countries
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, with almost 20. That of those in lower secondary
schools
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in the world average was higher than those of those in lower secondary
schools
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in the UK, Denmark, and Iceland, with nearly 27.
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, those of those in lower secondary
schools
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in the UK, Denmark, and Iceland were lower than those of those in primary
schools
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, with roughly 17, 20, and 20.
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