You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, •Complain about the situation . •Say why this is a problem •And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Mr. George I am writing
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letter to draw your attention to late late-night noise problem from a new campus restaurant, and all the hostel students are facing
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problem every night.
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,
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is the only food zone in our area which is open until midnight and
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restaurant has become a hot spot for all youngsters, they are having a party with high music making noise and bothering other neighbours around the area. Because of everyday meetups and people dancing to loud music, I am unable to take a peaceful bedtime and sometimes face more challenges
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I am studying. I would be more thankful if you suggested they lower their music system volume during the nighttime or else appeal to them to upgrade the restaurant's walls by using noise cancellation material which not only helps us to have complete sleep during the night but
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fosters their business to grow. I am hoping that you will consider
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matter and facilitate a better solution to
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problem. I look forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, Vairag.

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task achievement
Consider providing more details about the specific noise levels or instances that have caused issues for students. This would strengthen your complaint.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to proofread for repeated words, such as 'late' in your opening sentence. Also, try to split longer sentences for clarity and ease of reading.
suitable writing tone
The letter is polite and maintains a respectful tone throughout, which is very important in formal correspondence.
complete response
You effectively highlighted the impact of the noise on your studies and sleep, making your complaint relatable.
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