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Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

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Life
 before the
internet
 was slow but after
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internet
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 it
have
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 become fast
as well as
easily
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. The below information
explain
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 to what extent I agree or disagree with
this
 statement. In
early
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an early
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time
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times
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 before
internet
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the internet
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, people
life
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 very
slow
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.
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then
 it was
slow
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 process but now it
have
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 become fast and
easily
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. In
old
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 days if children want to learn about
the
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a
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 topic
than
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then
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 it he or she
it
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is
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 to find in many books but now they can
sreach
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search
reach
 and can get the information and data easily.
The social
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 media have
reduses
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reduced
reduces
 the distance from each other.
The social
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 media have made
a
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the
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 world a small
market place
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marketplace
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.
Internet work
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 as
techer
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teacher
teachers
, a
sellperson
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salesperson
sell person
,
adiver
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a diver
, and as
the
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speaker
also
.
However
, there is so many
problem
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problems
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due to
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internet
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such
 as the public
spend
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 more time on the
internet
 and social media. The
intenet
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Internet
 has even
affect
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affected
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on
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human
life
 too much.
Due to
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internet
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 there is a great contribution to the development and growth.if a man in another state
want
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 to see a person from
other state
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another state
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then
 he can video call the man.
Internet
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have
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 even made good relation with two nations.
Human
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Humans
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 can easily learn with the help of
internet
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To conclude
, the
internet
have
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 made
life
easily
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easy
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 but even
complicative
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complicated
also
. So, the
internet
have
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has
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 many
and
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apply
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more benefits. So, the above information
describe
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about
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the
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to what extent
i
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 agree
the
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 statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cyber-security
  • Data breach
  • Identity theft
  • Misinformation
  • Fake news
  • Connectivity
  • Instant messaging
  • Social media platforms
  • Revolutionized communication
  • Educational resource
  • Privacy concerns
  • Public opinion
  • Information access
  • Data vulnerability
  • Verification of information
  • Digital transformation
  • Online presence
  • Global village
  • Social harmony
  • Internet infrastructure
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