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There is a sports stadium near your home where large number of people come to watch games each weekend.This cause you and your neighbours aome problems. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter- -Explain who you are and where you live -Describe the Problem -Suggest what the local council should do

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is [Your Name], and I reside on Steven Road, located near Avon Park. I am reaching out to bring to your attention the considerable disturbances our community faces each weekend
due to
 the numerous sports events held at the stadium. Primarily, the traffic congestion around the stadium becomes quite severe, with the narrow streets often becoming heavily gridlocked.
This
 makes it exceedingly difficult for residents, including myself, to access our homes during event days.
Furthermore
, the noise associated with the games, particularly during evening matches, can be quite disruptive, making it hard for families to relax and enjoy their time at home. I suggest the local council establish designated parking areas
further
 away from residential neighbourhoods to mitigate congestion.
Additionally
, I recommend that the council work in collaboration with stadium management to consider the installation of sound barriers or enforce stricter noise regulations to significantly reduce disturbances for local residents. Thank you for your attention to
this
 urgent matter. Sincerely, Ankush
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task achievement
You might want to include specific examples or incidents to further illustrate the problems faced due to the stadium events. This would strengthen your argument and enhance the letter's persuasive power.
coherence cohesion
Breaking down different problems and solutions into separate paragraphs could help in organizing information more effectively, thereby improving coherence.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and demonstrates respect and clarity, which enhances its readability.
coherence cohesion
Clear greeting and closing statements provide a professional touch to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residence
  • proximity
  • noise pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • inconvenience
  • crowds
  • loudspeakers
  • parking problems
  • designated parking areas
  • shuttle services
  • residential zones
  • noise controls
  • litter management
  • street cleaning
  • public transport routes
  • personal vehicle use
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