Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?

Poor nutrition and overweight is

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issue

in several wealthy nations and some individuals think that a tax on junk

food

would alleviate the

issue

. I totally disagree with

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statement because

this

trend can have a negative impact on

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econmoy

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economy

of

countries

,

however

, I would like to recommend some measures to tackle

this

issue

including,

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the restaurant

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restaurant

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to make healthy

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awareness among

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. On the one hand, I

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strongly

believe

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taxes

in

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fast

food

can

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harmful consequence on

local

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economy of

countries

. To illustrate,

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taxes on junk

food

can discourage people to purchase it.

Therefore

,

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sales

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of local

restaurants

in industrialized

countries

will decline, which

mean

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local

restaurants

will struggle financially.

Furthermore

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these

restaurants

will lose their jobs.

Consequently

,

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of poverty among people in rich

countries

will increase, which

mean

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more poverty

mean

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more crime.

On the other hand

, I would like to suggest some solutions to

mtigate

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mitigate

this

issue

. The first effective solution, the government could introduce regulations regarding

of

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unhealthy

food

.

For example

, the authorities could motivate

restaurants

to reduce the amount of fat in their

food

and increase the amount of healthy nutrition namely, vegetables. The second efficient measure,

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could launch educational campaigns in order to raise awareness among

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the public

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about eating too much junk

food

.

For instance

, the UK government organize plenty of educational programs about

dangers

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the dangers

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of unhealthy

food

in school and universities.

To sum up

, I completely disagree with

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of

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taxes on fast

food

on

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developed nations because it can have

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influence on

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economy of

countries

,

however

, I suggested some actions to overcome

this

problem

such

as,

incentivize

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restaurants

to make healthy

food

, and raise awareness among

public

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the public

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.