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The given bar graph illustrates the first birth of a
child
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 by Australian mothers in three different
years
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: 1966, 1986, and 2006. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is obvious that women in the past tended to have their first
child
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 at earlier stages of life rather than in recent
years
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.
While
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 having a
child
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 at the age of 20 was highly common, in newer given
years
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 it had become relatively rare. In 1966, above 60% of Australian women had their first
child
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 between the ages of 19 to 24.
This
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 figure dropped substantially in the next decade to below 40% and in the next 20
years
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, it saw the lowest percentage approximately
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28%.
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, for the group aged under 19, in the year 1966, the number was almost a third
while
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 in the coming
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 had decreased to 20% ( in 1986 ) and 12 ( in 2006).
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, only 12% of the female population of Australia between the ages 30-34 preferred to become mothers in 1966.
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, their number grow dramatically and doubled to reach a peak at just under half in 2006. The equal situation happened for ages 34-39, which rose significantly from 8% in 1966 to 30% after 20
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.
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little growth for women under 40 despite steady growth from 2% to 4%.
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