the table below shows stastistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

the table below shows stastistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
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The table compares the top five countries in terms of the
number
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of
tourists
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and the money spent by the
tourists
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between the years 2012 and 2013.
It is clear that
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France was the most popular destination in
this
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period of two years. Though France had the highest
number
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of
tourists
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, the USA had the highest figure for tourist spending over the same period. In 2012, 83
million
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tourists
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visited France, and the USA was the runner-up, whose
number
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of
tourists
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was sitting at 66.7
million
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. Spain and China both received just under 58
million
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visitors,
while
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Italy had been visited by 46.4
million
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people. One interesting fact is that in 2013,
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other countries’ numbers of visitors saw an increase, ranging from 1 to 4
million
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people, China was an exception, in which the figure decreased by 2
million
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. Spending by
tourists
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visiting the USA rose from $126.2
billion
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in 2012 to $139.6
billion
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in 2013, and these figures were over twice as high as those for other countries. Spain received the second-highest amount of revenue that came from international
tourists
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, earning $56.3
billion
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in 2012 and $60.4
billion
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in 2013. The other three countries saw increases in spending as well, spanning from 1 to 2
billion
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dollars. Interestingly enough, in spite of the fact that China saw a declining
number
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in the
number
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of
tourists
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, the money earned increased by 1.7
billion
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dollars.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, million, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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