Government should spend money on railways more than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The government’s
budget
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is limited, which makes it crucial for them to
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a good call about its expenditure. It is argued that they should invest their
budget
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in public transportation, like
railways
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, rather than
roads
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, which are more used by private
cars
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. I have a balanced opinion of that.
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I believe there should be more investments in public
transport
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, I believe there are a few considerations that shouldn’t be overlooked. It is true that
governments
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have limited budgets and different options for spending them. I think public transportation is one of the best choices. Since it is much more difficult for people to use public
transport
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,
governments
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should address
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problem by facilitating it.
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, if people get used to using
railways
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or other public
transport
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, it might lessen some environmental problems that are caused by using
cars
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frequently, like global warming.
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, it should be noted that the government
budget
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usually is allocated by taxpayers, and they might prefer using their own
cars
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.
Governments
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are responsible for the taxpayers’ basic requests, and being able to travel on good, well-built
roads
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is one of them.
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, we should be aware that
roads
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are important to each nation in many ways, and I am going to mention only one of them, which is emergency matters. It is obvious that
railways
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are not the best option to use when an emergency matter happens.
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, if an earthquake happens, people will need to receive
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as soon as possible, and trains will take much more time than
cars
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.
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, I think
governments
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should keep the
roads
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prepared for
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problems, and for the ones who pay taxes and still want to use their own
cars
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. In conclusion, I think it is more reasonable to spend most of the
transport
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budget
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on trains and
railways
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, but I
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suggest that every country should consider each citizen’s needs, which in
this
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case is to be able to travel by their own
cars
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.
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,
roads
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are strategic for every nation and there might be some situations where
roads
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are the most needed, and government should pay attention to keeping them prepared to be used when they are the most necessary.
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Ensure that your opinions are presented more clearly and consistently throughout the essay.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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