The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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The line graph compares five different countries based on the amount of Co2 emissions per
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in a forty-year period, between 1967 and 2007.
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, the Uk and Sweden have experienced a decrease in Co2 emissions,
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in Italy and Portugal, the amount of carbon dioxide emitted per
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rose. At the beginning of 1967, each average individual in Portugal was emitting less than two tonnes of Co2.
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increased steadily over the next forty years, ending at well over 4. As regards Italy, the amount of carbon dioxide emitted per
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was marginally above 4, but it followed the same pattern of steady rise and overtook Sweden’s
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in 1987. Having reached just under 8 in 1997,
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Italy’s
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remained constant for the rest of the period in question. If we look at the line for the Uk, it started emitting more than 10 tonnes Co2 per
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. After remaining steady for the next decade, it started to decline slightly towards the end of the period, ending at almost 9. Sweden’s
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started at just above 8 and jumped to more than 10. After peaking in 1977, the
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witnessed a gradual reduction, and by 2007, it had fallen to less than 6.
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