Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

opine that

healthcare

is a crucial factor that

government

have to pay attention

while

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others believe that

government

should give

to

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equal or more weight

on

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another areas

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another area

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. I agree with the

later

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statement. On the one hand,

healthcare

is

important

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part of

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healthier society. It is observed that

people

would be less economically burdened if

government

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the government

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should prioritize

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healthcare

. It would be making more convenient and cost-effective for

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public to

checkup

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at

hospital

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the hospital

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.

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,

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financial support from the

government

in medicines, treatment and surgery

in

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is

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a

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low-cost

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with

a

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best service that will

affordable

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to

people

.

Hence

, the

government

should

helpful

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to provide financial support

instead

of bearing

them

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total cost.

On the other hand

,

government

investment should not be limited

within

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the

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healthcare

services. Education is a key factor for the

government

to receive another fund, it provides long-term development of the whole nation to receive funds that will be distributed to public facilities.

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, primary education should be free, and provide

subsidy

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to higher secondary students who are under

poverty

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the poverty

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line.

However

, public facilities

not

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are not

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only beneficial for

citizens

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citizens'

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daily life but

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should improve

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economic growth and higher standards of living. Apart from

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education, it is

also

suggested that taxpayer’s money should be utilized in public services, which will improve the investment and career opportunities for the

people

.

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, public transport and

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of

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the road

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road

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should be improved, so that

public

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will opt for it. In conclusion, I believe that allotment of

government

funds should be divided equally or more on society as a whole,

although

importance

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of

healthcare

is not underestimated.