The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps provided depict the way in which an
island
has been modified for tourism purposes.
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Overall
, as can be vividly seen from the given maps, the Linking Words
island
has undergone a profound metamorphosis, wherein it has become more accessible Use synonyms
as well as
having some places for tourists to stay. Linking Words
Furthermore
, six new developments can be seen on the second map.
Looking at the given maps in more detail, we can see that the trees have not been uprooted, and they are still there. Linking Words
Moreover
, at the Linking Words
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
island
, a reception has been built, and to the north and south of it, a restaurant and a pier have been added, respectively. Use synonyms
Additionally
, some houses for the purpose of accommodation have been raised to the left and right side of the reception. To the northwest of the Linking Words
island
, a swimming area is Use synonyms
also
added.
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As well as
the constructions mentioned above, some roads have Linking Words
also
been built. More precisely, a vehicle track has been added, linking the pier to the reception and the restaurant, and huts have Linking Words
also
been linked together using some footpaths.Linking Words
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