The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps provided depict the way in which an
island
has been modified for tourism purposes.
Overall
, as can be vividly seen from the given maps, the
island
has undergone a profound metamorphosis, wherein it has become more accessible
as well as
having some places for tourists to stay.
Furthermore
, six new developments can be seen on the second map. Looking at the given maps in more detail, we can see that the trees have not been uprooted, and they are still there.
Moreover
, at the
center
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of the
island
, a reception has been built, and to the north and south of it, a restaurant and a pier have been added, respectively.
Additionally
, some houses for the purpose of accommodation have been raised to the left and right side of the reception. To the northwest of the
island
, a swimming area is
also
added.
As well as
the constructions mentioned above, some roads have
also
been built. More precisely, a vehicle track has been added, linking the pier to the reception and the restaurant, and huts have
also
been linked together using some footpaths.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, as well as".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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