The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school.

The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school.
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The pie charts compare the different types of expenditure on a particular British school in three separate years.
It is clear that
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the payment for teachers’ salaries always accounts for the biggest portion of the
overall
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spending,
whereas
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the fund was the least allocated for insurance over the period shown. In 1981, 40% of the money was spent on paying for the salary of teachers,
while
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the figure peaked at 50% in 1991,
then
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decreased to 45% after a decade.
By contrast
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, the expenditure on paying other workers witnessed a sharp decline, in which the percentage was approximately halved, reducing from 28% to 15%. The trend for investing in resources was the same, which decreased by 6%,
although
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it reached a peak at 20%.
However
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, the trend for money spent on furniture and equipment was quite the opposite , which grew from 15% in 1981 to 23% 2 decades ago, but reached the bottom at 5% in 1991.
While
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the spending on insurance increased fourfold, from 2% to 8%, it was still the smallest proportion on the whole.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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