The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
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The bar
chart
compares the number of males and females who took four different evening courses in 2009, and the pie chart
illustrates the age
profile of these attendees.
It is clear that
significantly more women
than men
took evening classes at the centre. In addition
, we call tell that evening courses are more popular among elderly adults.
According to
the bar chart
, drama, painting and language courses, all attracted more women
than men
to the education centre in 2009. Language classes had the highest number of participants overall
, consisting of 40 female and 20 male students
, while
the painting class
was also
a popular class
for both genders, attracting 25 men
and 30 women
. Interestingly enough, while
female attendees were more than male students
in other classes, the sculpture course had more men
than women
students
, taken by 10 males and 5 females.
Referring to the age
profile pie chart
, we can see the class
mostly consisted of people who were 40 years old or older. To be more precise, 42% of the attendees were over the age
of 50, and 26% were aged between 40 and 49. Younger adults only made up a small proportion of this
class
, with 11% of students
aged 20 to 29 and 5% aged under 20 of age
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