The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011

The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011
The line graph illustrates the trend of global
food
and
oil
prices
from 2000 to 2011.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the world witnessed significant growth in
food
and
oil
prices
over the period shown, and the increase in the
oil
price outnumbered that of
food
. In 2000, the price of
oil
stood at roughly $22 per
barrel
, which increased approximately tenfold after eight years, to around $220 per
barrel
. The trend was the same for the price of
food
, rising from 90
points
then
peaking at 230
points
in 2008, with some fluctuations.
However
, there was a considerable decline for both
prices
, decreasing to slightly more than $60 per
barrel
and 110
points
, respectively in 2009. As they bounced back to varying degrees, the
prices
reached $95 per
barrel
and 170
points
in 2010.
Although
they experienced a decrease during the year, the
prices
of both grew to $140 per
barrel
which reached its peak and 180
points
in 2011, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, oil, prices, barrel, points with synonyms.
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