A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages

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Hello Aslı, I am writing to share my thoughts about a camping holiday you have asked me. I believe my past experience makes me an expert on holiday camping, and I want to say that you will have enjoyable times , particularly in being alone in the forest and meeting new friends.

On the other hand

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, dealing with non-domesticated animals and cold weather might be challenging for you

initially

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, but I am confident you will adapt quickly. The

last

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time I went camping, I encountered a bear, and the weather was extremely cold.

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, I decided to seek refuge in a hotel close to the camping zone.

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, I have plans to go camping in Datca

this

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year, pending approval from my boss. If he grants permission, I would love to join you.

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, it

also

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depends on one of my customers; she may request additional materials.

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this

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, I may need to stay in Samsun.

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I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my letter after your incredible camping experience. If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me. Kind regards, Salih Zeki

salihzekikoniTue Jan 02 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea. While there is an attempt to organize ideas, some paragraphs contained multiple unrelated points which can cause confusion.

Coherence and Cohesion

While the greeting and closing are appropriate, strive for a more robust structure within the main body of the letter to guide the reader through your points.

Task Achievement

Make sure to address all parts of the task fully. The disadvantages mentioned were brief and require further explanation and development to meet the task response criteria adequately.

Task Achievement

Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. While the tone is generally appropriate, there were instances of informality that could be perceived as too casual for the task.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
mutual interests

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