In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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the development made in
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, lots of
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surrounds the world still go starving.
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from
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is
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population
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growth
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the waste of
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the research done at the Seoul National Korean
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in Korea, in recent days, as the
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have grown, the food demand is rapidly increasing.
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, the supply of food in
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is
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. Most
people
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work in
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who are the old generation.
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, the climate changes unpredictably
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global warming.
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population
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growth and natural disaster leads
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large
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of
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suffering from
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. There are two possible solutions from the starve.
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, as the
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growing
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, the government should support the machines, which is regardless of
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and
places
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to increase the supply of food.
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, reducing
people
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who are suffering from
hunger
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.
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, it is essential to
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young generations to work in the
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industry
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as give
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high income and offer for accommodation
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they are working. In conclusion, even though technology is developing in
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, numerous
people
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are still starving around the world. I believe the technology for humans develops a lot.
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, the
agriculture
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industry still
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to increase.
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the world should encourage and provide more practical support to reduce
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who
suffering
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from
hunger
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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