Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The group of
people
that suggest planting
trees
inside cities are probably considering the effect that natural vegetation can have on
people
's mood and mental health. The opposing group possibly think about the effect
this
action has on housing prices, and how the cost of living should be decreased for everybody. I agree with the first group for two reasons,
firstly
because including
trees
and green areas in our cities could have an incredible effect on
people
's lives and their daily moods. What I've witnessed in my own experience is that whenever I take the time to get out of the city and connect with
nature
, I am instantly reminded of how much our environment has changed drastically from wondering all day in open areas surrounded by
nature
, into spending all day inside buildings and seeing concrete all day. I think that increasing
trees
and parks inside the city could help
people
connect with
nature
more often and more easily, and
consequently
increase their happiness. My second reason for wanting more
trees
is to preserve
nature
. We have already changed much of our surrounding habitat by industrialization, and fast population growth. The number of
trees
and the total amount of area covered by jungles has already been decreasing constantly since the beginning of the industrial era, and
this
can cause gradual but very important changes to our planet.
For example
, by increasing the total amount of
trees
on Earth, we can start to tackle problems like pollution or global warming.
Therefore
I think that we humans as a species should care more about reviving the Earth to its more natural days. In conclusion, I think that planting
trees
and including
nature
in our daily lives should be done as much as possible. I am aware of what financial concerns governments could have when deciding whether or not to build new housing facilities;
however
, they should endeavour to increase
nature
's role in
people
's lives as much as possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban forestry
  • Green infrastructure
  • Ecosystem services
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Urban sprawl
  • Biodiversity
  • Renewable resources
  • Sustainable development
  • Mixed-use development
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Affordable housing
  • Density
  • Zoning regulations
  • Public policy
  • Climate action
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