Some people think that all lawbreakers should be taken into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives (for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's

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, justice has become a matter of significant concern. Some

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argue that

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should be reintegrated into

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others believe jail is the best solution to reduce the

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of

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essay, I will examine both perspectives before presenting my own opinion. On one hand, those who support recovery as a practical method argue that these kinds of

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who commit a

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for a reason should be participants in

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because they have witnessed discrimination and disparities in front of other individuals for a long time.

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of these cruel behaviours, they would show more aggressive and offensive attitudes toward others.

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,

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hold biased attitudes towards

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because the vast majority of

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have bad backgrounds and suffer social exclusion and socio-economic status and they can not be understood

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a person who has successful

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life and good living condition.

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suggests that

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is promoting behavioural change and reducing repeat offences and

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increasing public safety.

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, proponents of taking to jail have asserted that punishment is the best method to reduce

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of the

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in

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on the grounds that a huge amount of effort is needed in order to rehabilitate

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and it is a burden for the government. An illustrative case is

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research, some

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tend to commit a

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biological considerations

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as mental illness that could not be solved by

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or treatment.

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, rehabilitation would not be seen as a deterrent method to reduce the

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among

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. Having considered both perspectives, I firmly believe that with a feasible ,rehabilitation

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could find a place in

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.

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, the governments should provide funds to create rehabilitation and

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centres to reintegrate

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and

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diminish the

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of the

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In conclusion, the issue of punishment has valid arguments from both sides.

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, after weighing the evidence, I am convinced that these

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should be educated

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the sustainable solution.