The given bar chart illustrates how many male and female played six different sports in English city during 2012.
The given bar chart illustrates how many
male
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males
female
played six different sports in English Fix the agreement mistake
females
city
during 2012.
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cities
Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart is that China and USA headed the list of electricity
production and consumption. While
France, Germany and Korea bottom the
list. Change preposition
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In addition
, Russia came the
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of
the list among the ten countries.
Looking at details regarding Change preposition
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China was the most country of Correct article usage
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electricity
expenditure and production both were almost similar and accounted by
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KWH
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While
the second most country utilize
and produce Change the verb form
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electricity
was USA by 4.099 and 3.866 KWH
respectively. Then
in Russia and Japan
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,Japan
the
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electricity
moderately and it represented 1.057 and 1.038 KWH
for Russia and 935 and 877 KWH
for Japan annually. Besides
, Korea was the least country of electricity
generation and expenditure by 485 and 445 KWH
yearly.Submitted by aliaelarabi5 on
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