You have just read a newspaper article with incorrect information. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter - Report the error to the editor - Correct the error in the article - Suggest the newspaper what to do with it.

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. My name is Ghazala and a customer of your newspaper name's Daily News for the
last
10 years.By profession, I am a geologist and the
last
weekend in your newspaper I read an article related to Pakistan's total area in square meters but that figure was wrong. The actual figure is 9999879 square meters
instead
of 9998956. Because of the popularity of your
newspaper
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no one can expect from your paper
this
type of negligence.
However
, it is not only about a figure but especially pointing out your mistake because a lot of students get the latest news from your paper which
also
helps to solve their entry test exams. So it is essential that before printing the newspapers one should do proofreading to eliminate mistakes and provide authentic information to your readers.kindly correct the information and publish
this
article again. Hope you will care about
this
type of mistake in future. Best regards, Ghazala Ashraf
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