IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4.5

Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some says that individuals should pay their university education. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

#people #government #education #level #individuals #university
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In
this
Linking Words
 contemporary era,the expenses of improvement have been a debated issue. some people believe that the government should cover the cost of information at every level.
while
Linking Words
 others tend to have the opposite viewpoint.
This
Linking Words
 essay will discuss both aspects of
this
Linking Words
 debatable issue and explain why should not be unpaid On the one hand, people say that learning at all levels should be free they argue that the unemployment rate is lower in countries that do
this
Linking Words
, In ,addition they think that students will not be stressed about their future and they will develop themselves better.
while
Linking Words
 others tend to have the opposite viewpoint.developed countries and undeveloped countries have different problems. since there are concerns about life before education in undeveloped counties,they do not want
this
Linking Words
 because if their government makes education free of charge,their taxes will increase.
Moreover
Linking Words
 ,students may underestimate school if culture is free. ı think universities should not be free of charge but should use the scholarship system.
this
Linking Words
 way quality students can continue to receive free schooling and do useful work for our future.
Submitted by ebruerkmen26 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: