Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the constantly increasing population creates more residential and economic requirements which is raising a concern that more accommodations should be built or used for business and boost economies

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of building public

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. I personally disagree with

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thought for the reasons provided below.

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with, during the tremendously escalating population, there are lots of skyscrapers, high-rise buildings and houses built which mitigate the greenery in cosmopolitan cities.

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leads to a lack of interaction among

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with mother nature that affects humans' mental health badly, especially for the poor ones. To illustrate,

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need a place

for relaxing

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the fresh air after a long day of work. In

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case, rich

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can come to many entertainment centres,

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, the poor ones can only choose public

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as their most suitable choice. If there are not any

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might have rare places for entertaining themselves and their families, which may cause depression and stress for residents of cities.

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a place for

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to arrange social activities for connecting with their friends or bonding with their family.

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, nowadays, residents almost don’t have much time for leisure activities so they often

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for the short time

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,

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give

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the sense of being in nature with the ecosystem including plants, trees and biodiversity with many small creatures. In these situations, public gardens play an important role in human life and encourage

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to have tight relationships. In conclusion, I believe that public

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are extremely important and must not be replaced for any reason. They are valuable in human society to provide social places and contribute to residential mental health. Governments should find other solutions to boost economies and solve problems related to accommodation.