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More business meeting are taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the same?

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Technological advancements particularly in the communication medium have resulted in wonders in the recent few years. Internet and online media is specifically trending for a few years for conducting
meetings
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 at different levels. Interestingly, it has replaced our previous mode of physical meeting very quickly and is quite popular at various levels in most professional sectors.
This
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 essay will discuss the benefits and harms of having
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 an online
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. 
Firstly
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, it is indeed true that there are many advantages of internet
business
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 and many of us are happy and prefer to keep
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meetings
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 as it allows flexibility of our
time
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 and place. It is possible to connect from remote areas or arrange a sudden meeting on short notice without asking employees to gather again in the
office
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, especially for a working single mother to take care of her baby and at the same
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 carry out her
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work
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 without taking long holidays. Overnight trade decisions are made by having
meetings
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 at even odd hours.
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 was started more frequently after the COVID-19 pandemic years.
Subsequently
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, more employers realized their potential and rented less
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 space and asked employees to
work
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 from home and turn increased their savings and
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 firm earnings.
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, a recent report mentioned how local businesses are blooming and running from home and about a change in
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 culture.
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, though the online mode of trade
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 has numerous benefits , at the same
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 there are some drawbacks
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. People have started realizing that
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 the absence of dedicated
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time
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, there is often a mixing of job and personal
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work
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 which is even more tiring and confusing.
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, working from home environment is causing more loneliness and psychological illnesses among adults. In conclusion, I believe the online mode of
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meetings
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 has its own benefits but at the same
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 has disadvantages too and so we should be careful and use it judiciously.
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