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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have? •someone who is quiet •someone who we are similar to •someone who is supportive Use specific details and examples in your answer.

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Nearby residents are individuals close to us and there are various kinds
such
 as
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 those who are quiet, who are similar and the ones that are supportive, I believe that a supporting next-door neighbour is better because it brings about a conducive neighbourhood to live in.
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 essay will describe specific details with examples. A surrounding with quiet residents where
people
 mind their businesses is good for some
people
 who prefer to be on their own
due to
 their personality, though not the best way because someone can not easily find out if their neighbours are in a dangerous condition and
also
 loneliness can result to someone having mental issues, of which it can be life-threatening
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 if nothing is done but
this
 can be prevented if they can be shown love and care from their next-door neighbours.
Furthermore
, a supportive environment helps
people
 get through bad situations and reduces crime because they live in harmony and look out for one another. There are present to share the happy and sad moments in their life with each other.
For example
, it is recorded that survivors from most emergency situations
such
 as fire outbreaks are rescued by
people
 around, and
also
 they help in reducing properties lost during
such
 accidents,
hence
 saving lives and property by being there in times of need. In conclusion, individuals living in our neighbourhood are the humans near us, so their showing support for each other and being there to help when unforeseen circumstances arise is beneficial to mankind.
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