The Graph Below Shows the Number of Shops that Closed and The Number of New Shops that Opened in One Country Between 2011 and 2018

The Graph Below Shows the Number of Shops that Closed and The Number of New Shops that Opened in One Country Between 2011 and 2018
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The line graph represents the
number
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of closing shop
number
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and the of new shop
openings
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in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
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, the
number
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of closing shops was higher than new shops opening in 2018. The trend of
closures
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has been decreasing gradually. The economy of
this
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country is healthy, referring to the small
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of
closures
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in 2015. From 2011 to 2013, the
number
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of
closures
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started at 6,500 and went up to 7,000.
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, the
number
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of
openings
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started at a huge
number
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, accounting for 8,500.
Then
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, it decreased dramatically to 4,000 in 2012 and rose to 5,000 in 2013. Surprisingly, the
number
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of
closures
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slightly declined to 6,500 in 2014, but that opening went up continuously to 6,000. Interestingly, the
number
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of
closures
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went down extremely, plunging from 6,500 to 500 in 2015. That
number
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of
openings
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decreased as well, accounting for 4,000 in 2015.
Then
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, the
number
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of
closures
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rose dramatically to 5,000 in 2016, and it remains stable until 2018. The
number
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of
openings
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also
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remains the same, accounting for 4,000, until 2017. It decreased slightly to 3,000 in 2018.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings, closures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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