The Graph Below Shows the Number of Shops that Closed and The Number of New Shops that Opened in One Country Between 2011 and 2018
The line graph represents the
number
of closing shop number
and the of new shop openings
in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, the number
of closing shops was higher than new shops opening in 2018. The trend of closures
has been decreasing gradually. The economy of this
country is healthy, referring to the small number
of closures
in 2015.
From 2011 to 2013, the number
of closures
started at 6,500 and went up to 7,000. By contrast
, the number
of openings
started at a huge number
, accounting for 8,500. Then
, it decreased dramatically to 4,000 in 2012 and rose to 5,000 in 2013. Surprisingly, the number
of closures
slightly declined to 6,500 in 2014, but that opening went up continuously to 6,000. Interestingly, the number
of closures
went down extremely, plunging from 6,500 to 500 in 2015. That number
of openings
decreased as well, accounting for 4,000 in 2015. Then
, the number
of closures
rose dramatically to 5,000 in 2016, and it remains stable until 2018. The number
of openings
also
remains the same, accounting for 4,000, until 2017. It decreased slightly to 3,000 in 2018.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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