The Graph Below Shows the Number of Shops that Closed and The Number of New Shops that Opened in One Country Between 2011 and 2018

The Graph Below Shows the Number of Shops that Closed and The Number of New Shops that Opened in One Country Between 2011 and 2018
The line graph represents the
number
of closing shop
number
and the of new shop
openings
in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, the
number
of closing shops was higher than new shops opening in 2018. The trend of
closures
has been decreasing gradually. The economy of
this
country is healthy, referring to the small
number
of
closures
in 2015. From 2011 to 2013, the
number
of
closures
started at 6,500 and went up to 7,000.
By contrast
, the
number
of
openings
started at a huge
number
, accounting for 8,500.
Then
, it decreased dramatically to 4,000 in 2012 and rose to 5,000 in 2013. Surprisingly, the
number
of
closures
slightly declined to 6,500 in 2014, but that opening went up continuously to 6,000. Interestingly, the
number
of
closures
went down extremely, plunging from 6,500 to 500 in 2015. That
number
of
openings
decreased as well, accounting for 4,000 in 2015.
Then
, the
number
of
closures
rose dramatically to 5,000 in 2016, and it remains stable until 2018. The
number
of
openings
also
remains the same, accounting for 4,000, until 2017. It decreased slightly to 3,000 in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings, closures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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