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The chart below gives information about Tasmania's main sources of income in 2001, 2015 and projections for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relrvant.

The chart below gives information about Tasmania's main sources of income in 2001, 2015 and projections for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relrvant.
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This
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 bar chart illustrates Tasmania's revenues from three main categories in 2000,
2015
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and 2015
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, and an estimated income in 2030.
Overall
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, natural resources and tourism showed an upward trend from 2001 to 2015, and they are predicted to continue to grow.
However
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,
food
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products
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 depicted an unchanged trend until 2015, and it is expected to drop in 2030. Focusing on natural resources, its
revenue
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 was 2
billion
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 AUDs, which was twice the amount of
revenue
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 compared to that of
food
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products
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 in 2001. It increased by 0.4
billion
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AUD
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 and remained higher than any other in 2015. Turning to tourism, its
revenue
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 was the lowest of all categories at 0.6
billion
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AUD
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 in 2001,
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 it surpassed the income of
food
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products
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, reaching 1.4
billion
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AUD
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 in 2015.
In contrast
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, the
revenue
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 from
food
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products
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 remained steady at 1
billion
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AUD
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 both in 2001 and 2015.
According to
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 projections for 2030,
although
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 the income from
food
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products
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 is forecast to decline by approximately 0.2
billion
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AUD
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, the remaining fields are projected to grow, and natural resources and tourism will reach 3 and 2
billion
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AUD
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, products, revenue, billion, aud with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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