The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

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Presented for consideration is a pie chart detailing figures for the expenditure of a country. The units are calculated in billion.

Overall

, it can be seen that spending on Social surveillance AED took the largest area,

while

Transport AED was spent the least.

Additionally

, figures for Other expenditures AED were the same. Looking at Social

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AED, Transport AED, Health and personal social services AED and Education AED in

further

detail, expenditure on Social

freedom

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Freedom

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AED, which led position at $100B,

also

was nearly twice as Health and personal social services AED

spending

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This

is followed by $38B of Education AED. Contrary to Social

preservation

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AED, Transport AED occupied the humblest region with $9B. Turning to the remaining data, figures for Industry, agriculture & employment AED; Law and order AED; Housing heritage and environment AED ranged from $13B to $17B.

Moreover

, it is recorded that there were two similar spending on Debt interest AED and Other AED, which both accounted for $23B, followed by Defense AED with $22B.

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The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

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