The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

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Presented for consideration is a pie chart detailing figures for the expenditure of a country. The units are calculated in billion.

Overall

, it can be seen that spending on Social surveillance AED took the largest area,

while

Transport AED was spent the least.

Additionally

, figures for Other expenditures AED were the same. Looking at Social

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AED, Transport AED, Health and personal social services AED and Education AED in

further

detail, expenditure on Social

freedom

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AED, which led position at $100B,

also

was nearly twice as Health and personal social services AED

spending

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This

is followed by $38B of Education AED. Contrary to Social

preservation

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AED, Transport AED occupied the humblest region with $9B. Turning to the remaining data, figures for Industry, agriculture & employment AED; Law and order AED; Housing heritage and environment AED ranged from $13B to $17B.

Moreover

, it is recorded that there were two similar spending on Debt interest AED and Other AED, which both accounted for $23B, followed by Defense AED with $22B.

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The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today’s food travel thousands of miles before it reaches the customer. Some people say that it would be better for the economy and environment if people ate food produced from local farmers. Would the advantages of this idea outweigh the disadvantages?

Tell us about a day where you went out and had fun

in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or negative development