The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
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Presented for consideration is a pie chart detailing figures for the expenditure of a country. The units are calculated in billion.
Overall
, it can be seen that spending on Social surveillance AED took the largest area,
while
Transport AED was spent the least.
Additionally
, figures for Other expenditures AED were the same. Looking at Social
guarantee
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AED, Transport AED, Health and personal social services AED and Education AED in
further
detail, expenditure on Social
freedom
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AED, which led position at $100B,
also
was nearly twice as Health and personal social services AED
spending
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.
This
is followed by $38B of Education AED. Contrary to Social
preservation
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AED, Transport AED occupied the humblest region with $9B. Turning to the remaining data, figures for Industry, agriculture & employment AED; Law and order AED; Housing heritage and environment AED ranged from $13B to $17B.
Moreover
, it is recorded that there were two similar spending on Debt interest AED and Other AED, which both accounted for $23B, followed by Defense AED with $22B.
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