The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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being produced in different fields of studies

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to use to enhance the quality of human's

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who are living on

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planet. I entirely agree with

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given assertion based on some compelling reasons which will be discussed in detail. The first reason that I agree with

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statement is the fact that various types of science have been playing a vital role to convert

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planet into a better place for living since humans found themselves in

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world.

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, in the ancient era when people had not discovered the wheel, they could not travel to far-fetched places easily or if they wanted to move heavy materials

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as stones to build their shelters, they had to put a

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of energy and time to do

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action but After the invention of

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, a great number of works that they needed a

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of efforts, run more smoothly. The second reason for

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agreement is that there are a

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of issues and difficulties that humans are tackling with them and unfortunately, scientists and specialists have not been able to find an appropriate solution for them.

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there are a huge number of problems in people’s

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yet and they are looking forward to new scientific inventions and innovations until they could live more

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and happier.

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these days a

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of fatal diseases are not dangerous anymore because medical researchers found proper remedies for them, there is a significant number of health issues that they put human populations in severe jeopardy

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as different types of cancer which are killing a

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of individuals all around the world every year.

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science have a

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of work to do to improve people's

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and should continue inventing and creating undoubtedly.

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, it is my firm conviction that the ultimate purpose of science must be to increase the quality of people's

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and get human life journeys better, sweeter and more delightful as it did it before and it will do in the future.