Some people believe that Internet users should be able to express any opinion online. Other people feel that governments or the companies that own websites should limit what people can say online.

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denying
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any
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firms and
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organisations
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opinions.
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folk they want is
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flexible
.
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justice
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is not allowed in all countries so if people have expressed and discuss any issue with
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mannered
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especially
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they will express
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online would be dangerous and had broken
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some
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cooperation
. It is
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attitude
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overrated
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of expressing people's
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on
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which maybe some
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comment
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side, its handle
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responsibility
. In conclusion, there is no easy to answer
this
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question
. On balance,
however
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our
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demonstrate
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demand and what the best.
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