Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
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people
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technology
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This
essay supports that it is a negative Linking Words
development
because of two reasons, a reduction of real-life Use synonyms
interaction
and an increase in the risk of exposing personal Use synonyms
information
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The choice Use synonyms
people
made, using Use synonyms
technology
as a new media to conduct their social life, may reduce physical Use synonyms
interaction
between humans since the new Use synonyms
development
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technology
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people
to communicate distantly using their mobile devices. Use synonyms
People
will have less desire to get out of their door to have an in-person meetup with the person they are interacting with. Use synonyms
For example
, my mother used to have a friend meeting once a week to gossip. When they all got phones, the meetup became texting over phones. Linking Words
Thus
, the new Linking Words
technology
decreases Use synonyms
people
's desire to have real-life interactions.
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technology
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also
exposes our personal data to danger. As far as I know, though the companies declare that their protection for the users' is incredibly strong, there are still thousands of hundreds of data leakage happening every hour. Linking Words
For instance
, I read a news about a small communication company's server centre that was cracked by hackers, and approximately 500 clients or users' personal Linking Words
information
got stolen and sold to different buyers, which includes scammer companies and other criminals committing illegal activities. It is proved by the example that important Use synonyms
information
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this
new way of Linking Words
interaction
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To sum up
, the Linking Words
development
of the new way is a negative Use synonyms
development
as it causes a reduction of physical Use synonyms
interaction
and puts our personal Use synonyms
information
in danger.Use synonyms
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