Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the method used by
people
to communicate with others has changed due to
the development
of technology
. This
essay supports that it is a negative development
because of two reasons, a reduction of real-life interaction
and an increase in the risk of exposing personal information
.
The choice people
made, using technology
as a new media to conduct their social life, may reduce physical interaction
between humans since the new development
of technology
allows people
to communicate distantly using their mobile devices. People
will have less desire to get out of their door to have an in-person meetup with the person they are interacting with. For example
, my mother used to have a friend meeting once a week to gossip. When they all got phones, the meetup became texting over phones. Thus
, the new technology
decreases people
's desire to have real-life interactions.
The new technology
also
exposes our personal data to danger. As far as I know, though the companies declare that their protection for the users' is incredibly strong, there are still thousands of hundreds of data leakage happening every hour. For instance
, I read a news about a small communication company's server centre that was cracked by hackers, and approximately 500 clients or users' personal information
got stolen and sold to different buyers, which includes scammer companies and other criminals committing illegal activities. It is proved by the example that important information
may be in danger when using this
new way of interaction
.
To sum up
, the development
of the new way is a negative development
as it causes a reduction of physical interaction
and puts our personal information
in danger.Submitted by maokaiyi0423 on
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