What are some of the factors in modern society that causes stress for young professionals and how we can reduce it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Many changes in modern society cause stress for young

professionals

in many countries.

This

phenomenon is becoming more widespread in the present age.

This

essay will examine the factors and various solutions that could be taken to improve the situation. There are a variety of different factors in

this

issue.

Firstly

, the learning pressure of young

professionals

is too great.

This

is because there’s so much

homework

to do.

For example

, in most Vietnamese schools,

students

usually have 5 lessons, and each subject will have

homework

, so the number of

homework

to do is very large.

Secondly

, expectations from their family. It is possible to say that score is the main cause of stress for young

professionals

.

For example

,

parents

in Asian countries often focus on their

children

’s grades,

although

this

may show concern for their

children

, it inadvertently puts a lot of pressure on their

children

such

as I have a friend who always has to try to get ten in all

subjects

to please his

parents

. Despite these circumstances, there are several actions that individuals could take to solve the problems.

Firstly

, schools should allow

students

to choose

subjects

that

students

love to minimize those

subjects

they don't really care about later in life,

then

they won't need to complete all the assignments in all the

subjects

.

For instance

, In today's high school,

students

are allowed to choose their favourite block and

this

has reduced a lot of pressure on

students

it was shown through a recent interview,

students

say that they feel more comfortable doing

homework

because the amount of work has decreased and it's all their favourite subject.

Secondly

,

Parents

should not focus too much on grades,

instead

, they should focus on the learning process and always encourage their

children

.

For example

, my

parents

no longer put so much emphasis on grades, they looked at my daily efforts, and they used to tell me that what I need to do is try to do better than myself yesterday,

this

has really made me feel more relaxed and stress-free. In conclusion, stress for young

professionals

is a matter of concern. Personally, I think

Parents

need to care about their

children

, but not only look at the score that their

children

achieve,

parents

need to create comfort for their

children

.