In many countries it is now illeagal to advertise alchohol. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #alchohol

Nowadays, alcoholic beverages are prohibited in many countries.

This

essay agrees with

this

idea because it is not only harmful to our health but to our friends and relatives as well.

Firstly

alcohol

can leave bad consequences for our bodies. What I mean about

this

is that by drinking too many alcoholic drinks, the user cannot control their mind and body.

As a result

, it could lead to unexpected outcomes

such

as vehicle crashes, domestic violence or even cancer in the long run.

For example

, a lot of Vietnamese citizens suffered from liver cancer

due to

their regular consumption of beer at many wedding parties. Another reason why

alcohol

is banned is that it had effectively damaged the daily life of many families. When a family member suffered from

alcohol

, they can become more aggressive than ever, which makes them abusive to other members of their family. One example of

this

is that most family breakdowns around the world are often linked to

alcohol

issues.

Consequently

, families would be shattered, and kids who live under these families might be traumatized for the rest of their life. In conclusion,

alcohol

causes a negative impact on our health and breaks our family relationships,

therefore

, it should be banned

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