You bought a laptop while you were travelling abroad. When you reached your native country you realised that some items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the representative of the company. In your letter, give details of the laptop and from where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

Dear Smith, I am writing
this
letter to remind you
last
week when I visited your country, I bought a Lenovo S4
laptop
in grey colour from your local store which is located in the centre of Dubai City. As I just bought the
laptop
on the
last
day of my trip and I did not open it because my packing was not done and only two hours left on my flight.
However
, When I reach back home and I unpack my bag, I saw the charger for the
laptop
and headset are missing from the box. I am Worrier about it. I have my purchase bill in which you mention all the belongings of the
laptop
, I will attach that one to my email as a piece of evidence. Can you check with your staff may be at the time of packing they forget to put these two items in the box. I am waiting to hear you soon. Yours Faithfully, Veerpal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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