The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps demonstrate the
center
of a small town named Islip in its current view and plans for future generations.
Generally, currently, the maximum Change the spelling
centre
objects
represented are shops and housing, however
, single objects
are only schools, parks, and main roads. For the planned development, it is clear that
the objects
of housing and shops will still exist in the future plan, while
new objects
will be included. The south part of the area will suffer from being more constructed than the north part of the area.
Comparing the second map with the first map, it is understandable that more objects
will be constructed, and the neighborhood
of the shop Change the spelling
neighbourhood
center
will include a bus station and car park. The main road will be longer than it is now. and it will be delivered to the southern part of the area. There will be a connection with the main road between the school and Change the spelling
centre
park
.Correct article usage
the park
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