You bought a laptop while you were travelling abroad. When you reached your native country you realised that some items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the representative of the company. In your letter, give details of the laptop and from where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that
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have lost my electronic gadget
while
coming back to my living place. I purchased my
laptop
from
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Buy shop located in Canada.It was of hp company and was expensive.The
color
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of
laptop
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the laptop
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was black.
Moreover
, it had plenty of features.
Apart from
this
, several files and
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amount of data
was
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saved before. After visiting the particular shop ,
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kept my all electronic appliances in my bag.I did not start it.
On the other
hand
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when
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reached
at
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my dwelling place ,
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observed that
laptop
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was not working.It was really shocking news for me.
Furthermore
,saved data was erased namely various applications and games were not there. I would like to request to get back
this
laptop
,please work on it and make some changes. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Navdeep Kaur
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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