Some people think that team sports prepare children for work life but others think individual sports are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Sports
plays a vital role in individuals
life.For mental and physical Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
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development
devlopment
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development
sport
is really important
There is on going
debate that Correct your spelling
ongoing
play
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playing
sports
in Add an article
the group
a group
group
is more Fix the agreement mistake
groups
benificial
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beneficial
while
other
argue that Fix the agreement mistake
others
play
Replace the word
playing
sports
by
own Change preposition
on
is
Change the verb form
are
more
better.Change the word
apply
This
essay will further
elaborate both
the sides of argument.
Analyzing and explaining Change preposition
on both
former
argument Correct article usage
the former
further
, group
sports
are better for a plethora of reasons. First
and Correct article usage
The first
formost
reason is Correct your spelling
foremost
team work
. When Correct your spelling
teamwork
person
Add an article
a person
play
a Change the verb form
plays
group
sport
he or she can learn how to work in team
. Add an article
a team
One
can learn how to cooprate
with Correct your spelling
cooperate
other
Change the wording
another team mate
other team mates
team
mate.further more
, Correct your spelling
furthermore
individual
Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
devlope
sportsman spirit by playing Correct your spelling
develop
in
Change preposition
apply
team
sports
. players
can learn social skills in their life.Players
earn respect for each other and other than that they respect each others
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other's
decision
. Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
In
addition
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,addition
players
learn new technique
and Fix the agreement mistake
techniques
differnt
skills from other Correct your spelling
different
players
. For instance
, in cricket one
player is good at bowling in last
overs , Correct article usage
the last
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and other
other player
can learn how to bowl correctly in Change the wording
another player
other players
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the deapth
deapth
over.
On the other Correct your spelling
depth
side
some people claim that individual Add a comma
,side
sport
is far more benificial
to Correct your spelling
beneficial
player
than playing in Fix the agreement mistake
players
team
. Add an article
a team
the team
To begin
with , one
can grow more rapidly by playing their own. Moreover
, person
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a person
doesnot
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does not
have
toChange the verb form
has
dependant
on Replace the word
depend
team
. He or she can perform and make Add an article
the team
a team
decision
Add an article
a decision
how
they want to play without worrying about anything. To Change preposition
about how
illustarte
, in Correct your spelling
illustrate
badminton
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,badminton
one
can play and apply their own skills to achieve the target score .They can earn fame by their performance not by their teams
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team's
teams'
overall
performance. when someone achieve
or Change the verb form
achieves
win
any Change the verb form
wins
sport
by theirselves
it boosts their confidence Correct your spelling
themselves
thus
they can give more efforts
Fix the agreement mistake
effort
to
Change preposition
into
thier
next games.
By Correct your spelling
their
agglomarating
all the points aforementioned above , Correct your spelling
agglomerating
one
can reach to
the conclusion that both individual and Change preposition
apply
group
sports
have their own merrits
ad Correct your spelling
merits
demerrits
. By playing in Correct your spelling
demerits
group
Correct article usage
a group
one
can learn teamwork while
playing individually can boost ones
confidence.
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one's
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